Oh damn, I guess the clue was in the title, but I still got caught out by the plot twist. Found the detailed description of the scene before the explosion — well done and vivid — but perhaps went a few lines/paragraph too long, made the story drag a little bit IMHO. But still, how you showed the contrast of the ordinary and mundane of life — colliding with the chaos and extraordinary of life, changing everything in that one blink of an eye — is a triumph. Bravo to you 🌻