Oh damn, I guess the clue was in the title, but I still got caught out by the plot twist. Found the detailed description of the scene before the explosion — well done and vivid — but perhaps went a few lines/paragraph too long, made the story drag a little bit IMHO. But still, how you showed the contrast of the ordinary and mundane of life — colliding with the chaos and extraordinary of life, changing everything in that one blink of an eye — is a triumph. Bravo to you 🌻

Hey there I'm D. Writer/Storyteller. Mother. Poet. I know a little Tai Chi - but my Kung Fu is weak. Beautifully flawed. Email:dabboh76@outlook.com

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