Yes. @jeauxzephwrites IMHO, here, you have composed sentences from your thoughts that pursue clarity and communicate what you actually mean to say. That is the Writers way - or the 'Tao of the Writer' if you will. That is your value. But, the truth is - not everything is for everyone. Some will revere it, others will not. This, again, I find is the way of writers life, it will wreak havoc on your nerves and emotions. So, cheer yourself on, even when the world does not. Write on.